Sunday, April 07, 2013

Love Trio



those perfect lovers
argue over minor stuffs
cuddling romances

passion embraces
calmly lick wounded ego
a balm for soured hearts

she avoids darkness
escapade with naughty sun
tickling squint in eyes


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36 comments:

  1. I can see a scene happening like a movie!! Lovely haiku!!

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  2. Wow... agree with Nanka...! I could imagine a slideshow moving in my head! ;)

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  3. Perfection is a superficial dimension! Interesting haiku!

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  4. Each tells its own story. I enjoyed them.

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  5. Nicely! The first one's my favourite.

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  6. Excellent Haiku! Loves the lines.

    I stumbled upon your blog and found so many great stuffs here. Your works are really amazing. I had a great time reading some of them. Keep them coming! :)

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  7. Arguing over minor stuff..... perhaps that leads to making up! :)

    Love Letter

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  8. What a passionate and sensual poem. Loved each verse here!

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  9. picturesque haiku blending with perfection& passion..GOD<3U

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  10. beautiful, lovely! First one is awesome.

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  11. Beautifully written..:)
    keep writing..:)

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  12. Loved this, I too saw it as a movie x a cinematic experience in your words. Very clever

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  13. Finally I could get to this place... Very nice that..as Nanka said..scenes unfold themselves.. Good one..

    I am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/orange-spills-on-water.html

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  14. lovely imagery there :)
    small things n great love

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  15. Terrific use of imagery.

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  16. I love the idea of the passion embraces as a balm for soured hearts!

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