Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Shozanji

true love
ever so boundless, like
soaring waves

soaring waves
wash my sins, and bless me
with knowledge


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Shozanji.




20 comments:

  1. The romantic in me likes the 1st one and the eternal thinker in me likes the 2nd one...
    And I loved the way you have blended 2 different thoughts in a cascading way...
    Good one Amrit!

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  2. 2 different thoughts infused !!
    Good try

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  3. Beautifully written and so meaningful. :)

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  4. True love is definitely like a soaring wave isn't it?

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  5. Would that every human being was blessed with knowledge!

    Pilgrims’ Filling

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  6. love....waves...washing our sins away...
    i think each play into gaining that knowledge

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  7. True love is like elixir, it can heal like no other medicine... Beautiful Amrit!!

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