Friday, March 15, 2013

Yuki No Hate (End Of Snow)



melting sun
kisses her snowy gaze
cascading warmth

weather warriors
break apart snowy terrains
inviting spring

snow flakes
flies back to the moon
winter in stars


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Yuki No Hate (End Of Snow).





20 comments:

  1. loved the third one.. My obsession with the moon :)

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  2. That second stanza was beautiful my friend.

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  3. I enjoyed this....especially that third stanza.

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  4. I love the imagery of your 3rd, but they are all wonderful as usual. thank you :)

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  5. Melting Sun is it??
    I loved that usage!

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  6. A whole new approach to the topic . Loved the way you have dissected it to subtle layers . Beautiful as usual :)

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  7. I love the last set / snowflakes remain in the moon and stars
    excellent
    hope you have a warm weekend

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  8. tender description of the end of snow...my heart melted ;-)

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  9. I love the snowflakes flying back to the moon, great imagery! :)

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  10. I am glad, G.S, that I don' have to pass judgement on these. They are all very nicely written, starting with the Sun who initiates the process and ending with the heavens so that those snow flakes may return another day.
    ..

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