Sunday, March 03, 2013

Breeze



O gentle breeze
will you sing to her
my hymns of love

roses dance
swirl with the breeze
smile and laugh

morning breeze
knocks at my window
carrying a new sun

she whispers
enchanting breeze
clock strikes twelve



This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Breeze.





40 comments:

  1. there is a bit of magic in thinking the breeze carries the messages of love...hoping that clock strike is not ominous...

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    1. The clock strike could perhaps be an indication of love :-)

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  2. Nice one. Leaves a feeling as if many stories are untold..


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  3. Lovely and mysterious, Mr.G ...

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  4. Love all these. I can just see the roses swirling and smiling in the breeze.

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  5. A breeze carrying love's message from one soul to the next...

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  6. Beautiful set! :) Loved the first one!

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  7. VERY VERY nice set of haiku. Seems like it was a breeze for you to write them.

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  8. Your words are simply beautiful.

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  9. wonderful set GS, loved the roses swirling in the breeze...Isn't it lovely to hear hymns of love from the breeze?

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  10. You have me thinking of how things change so dramatically by the intense light of day. Morning is full of promise.

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  11. I can visualize morning breeze carrying sun, how lovely!

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  12. What a delicate and romantic breeze you evoked in your poem!

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  13. Just cut an paste Wabi's comment here. ;-) I also thought "delicate and romantic" when I read this. You really have the touch for haiku.

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  14. When you hear that knocking at your window, do you jump from bed and greet it with joy, or do you burrow deeper under the covers?

    No Ruffling Breeze

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  15. Ahh... a Cinderella story. Romantic. :-)
    Eliz

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