Saturday, March 09, 2013

Origami



paper roses
bloom in her garden
without thorns

without thorns
she plucks the roses
her heart bleeds

her heart bleeds
missing the fragrance
long lost letters


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Origami.






52 comments:

  1. Heart heart bleeds without the thorns...what beautiful irony in that line.

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  2. A sudden twist in the 3rd haiku!

    Beautifully sad!!

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  3. Beautiful is melancholy...
    Loved this, Speck!!

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  4. Poetic evocation very interesting and beautiful, I like it.

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  5. Beautiful set - thanks for sharing!

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  6. I enjoyed this very much!

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  7. Speck, that is an incredible set of poems! All the haiku were lovely, and that last poem was just perfect. Loved this :-)

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  8. simply beautiful lines GS!! her grief just pours out...

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  9. That is a beautiful haiku there!
    I simply admire you, cuz my previous attempts at haikus have been, well...Nevermind.
    Love the blog you have here!

    xx
    Hopelessly Hopeful
    http://hopeihadasuperexcitingsecretlife.blogspot.in/

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  10. Oh my, "missing the fragrance" - what a perfect line for paper flowers!

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  11. Stunning - the image and the words. Thorns aren't always a bad thing! Loved this.

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  12. An excellent, touching end to this trilogy.

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  13. Awww... this is so beautiful! Meaningful and lovely! You're going great, Amrit!:)

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  14. A paper rose may be without thorns but it also misses on fragrance. Wonderful thought, very well captured.

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  15. Lovely roses. Great expressive haiku but sad.

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  16. beautiful series of romantic haiku.

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  17. Beautiful cascade, very powerful.

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  18. As usual, this one is also totally absorbing Amrit . Beautiful lines :)

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  19. Paper roses with no thorns. This is a favorite!

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  20. Nice connection of paper roses to long lost letters.

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