Monday, March 11, 2013

Uraraka (Serene)

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flowing mirror
reflects tranquility
serene ripples

serene ripples
invites love of spring
chirping leaves


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Uraraka (serene).






38 comments:

  1. flowing mirror-- lovely way to describe water.. :)

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  2. Wonderful twist around of words from one verse to the next..and yes..very tranquil..

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  3. nice...very tranquil words for me...i love nature...and love spring....time by the waters edge is soothing for me...for sure...

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  4. I love the serene ripples of a meandering stream...

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  5. Gorgeous-I long for serene ripples~
    :D

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  6. hey raam,when will i start thinking like this..

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    1. You already think a lot better than this :-)

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  7. Your nice words and the picture remind me of a couple of Japanesse gardens I have visited. One was in Ireland where, besides getting all bloody, I fell and broke my kneecap and dislocated my finger. Neither has healed well.

    The second is ours here in Houston, Texas. We took my visiting cousin there this spring. It is peaceful and tranquil this time of year when the crowds are not here for the summer.
    ..

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    1. Sorry for the 1st event ... injury is always bad Jim ... do take care !!!

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  8. Lovely, so calm, I liked chirping leaves.

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  9. ...loved the notion of the mirror that reflects tranquility... and your line about the chirping leaves is outstanding... much enjoyed serenity Haikus... thanks... smiles...

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  10. Mid-spring with all the chirping sounds - interesting GS!

    Hank

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  11. unique images and sounds...very lovely

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  12. I love the lines more than the image actually :)

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  13. so much is packed in. A mirror, spring, ripples and a calmness that effuses the whole piece

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  14. Transmiten delicadeza y dulzura.

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  15. Brudberg said what I wanted to say. Sigh! I was going to say as well that I love chirping leaves.

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