Sunday, March 24, 2013

Sea Nymph Kisses


sea nymph kisses
blushing cherry blossoms
spring raining love

spring raining love
she flies with the bees
in search of nectar

in search of nectar
they swim across the petals
tickling cherry flowers


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Onistura's Cherry Flowers.




42 comments:

  1. Beautiful imagery and very well penned :-)

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  2. Cool to think of them tickling the petals. Fine work, this.

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  3. Lovely cascading haiku ~ creates a divine feeling of Spring ~ Enjoy ^_^

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  4. I so love this poem, really wish I could write poetry , I tried on my last blog would value your comments

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  5. What a delightful story penned on spring... I love it Green!

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  6. Beautifully written; beautiful images!

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  7. beautiful imagery...i love the way cherry blossoms dance on the breeze....

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  8. I like those cherry blossoms ~ Nice tercets ~

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  9. Lovely cascade of petals... very nice

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  10. I love those "tickling flowers!"

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  11. Wow Speck, what a lovely bouquet of haikus! Love how you tied them all together so beautifully. Spring raining love really made me smile, touched my heart--wonderful :-)

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  12. overwhelmed by the lovely, almost magical images your words have painted!

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  13. aloha Green Speck. i particularly like the way your third ku works in this set. it engages the reader's mind rather than telling me. i like that. aloha.

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  14. My reaction:

    " ... in search of nectar
    they swim across the petals
    tickling cherry flowers" Awww :D

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    1. You always make me smile with your comments :-)

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  15. Spring raining love, Ah the very image is beautiful...Wonderfully woven poetry GS!!

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  16. Delicate as the cherry blossoms
    Thank you
    Peace,
    Siggi

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