Monday, December 02, 2013

Rainbow

in my playground
I slide down the rainbow
then, we climb again


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Rainbow.




42 comments:

  1. beautiful . used rainbow as a slide.

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  2. Creative and original haiku .Well done.

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  3. Aha! I almost saw myself doing that. Beautiful.

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  4. Thats so imaginative Amrit...
    Nice one!

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  5. Nd sometimes our knees break down while falling from that rainbow :D

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    1. Ha ha ha ... so wear knee guards before sliding down :-P

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  6. Oh wow, it is a very impressive Haiku,Amrit.A unique thought.

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  7. Love the deceptive simplicity of this evocative haiku. Marie

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  8. very nicely done, the simple joys of childhood:)

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  9. Playful! I imagined this thought too!

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  10. joyful moment - brings in visions of warm smiles and laughter

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  11. slide down the rainbow
    landing in a pot of gold
    swim with the goldfish

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  12. Beautiful and to the point. I like this haiku contribution.
    Eliz

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