harbour moon
the loneliness of fishermen
under lighthouse cliff
(Joe of Flat Frog Haiku)
My Continuation -
harbour moon
the loneliness of fishermen
under lighthouse cliff
counting marbles in their tray
childhood days, and a glass of beer
This Tan Renga is shared with Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge Month #XXX, Flatfroghaiku's "harbour moon'.
Reflecting and recounting on days gone by can be engrossing. Old friends get connected again. Nicely Amrit!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thank You Hank :-)
Delete"Counting marbles in their tray" - brought back beautiful childhood mem'ries. ♡
ReplyDeleteThanks Kulasa :-)
DeleteSuch a beautiful addition to the lines. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank You Saru :-)
DeleteBeautifully concluded...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Panchali ma'am :-)
DeleteI like the humour.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteFrom fishing to marble counting...and so they end their days...
ReplyDeleteSailors Lusting for Landfall
Yes :-)
DeleteNice continuation of this Tan Renga Amrit ... brought nice memories of my childhood.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kristjaan :-)
DeleteI love this conclusion. Find it quite visual.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sara :-)
DeleteDays don't come again... memories do!! :)
ReplyDeleteVery true :-)
DeletePerfect! :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Irene :-)
Deletewell that is so lovely - the memories of childhood games over a glass of beer. really love this moment. ☺
ReplyDeleteThank You Sun :-)
DeleteLove the old fishermen... I can see them
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Deletesuperb ., missed your posts :) :)
ReplyDeleteDon't miss them now :-P
DeleteWonderful completion!
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