Saturday, November 30, 2013

Harbour Moon

harbour moon
the loneliness of fishermen
under lighthouse cliff
                     (Joe of Flat Frog Haiku)

My Continuation -

harbour moon
the loneliness of fishermen
under lighthouse cliff
counting marbles in their tray
childhood days, and a glass of beer






27 comments:

  1. Reflecting and recounting on days gone by can be engrossing. Old friends get connected again. Nicely Amrit!

    Hank

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  2. "Counting marbles in their tray" - brought back beautiful childhood mem'ries. ♡

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  3. Such a beautiful addition to the lines. Loved it.

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  4. From fishing to marble counting...and so they end their days...

    Sailors Lusting for Landfall

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  5. Nice continuation of this Tan Renga Amrit ... brought nice memories of my childhood.

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  6. I love this conclusion. Find it quite visual.

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  7. Days don't come again... memories do!! :)

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  8. well that is so lovely - the memories of childhood games over a glass of beer. really love this moment. ☺

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  9. Love the old fishermen... I can see them

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  10. superb ., missed your posts :) :)

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