Sunday, December 08, 2013

Rivulet

O blue rivulet
would you listen to my stories
that I wish to forget


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Rivulet.




32 comments:

  1. mmm mmm mmmm, very moody haiku Amrit, enjoyed it immensely !

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  2. Lovely read for my morning. Thank you sir.

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  3. Rivulets carry memories , secrets not just water and pebbles.

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  4. Would you listen to the stories
    That I wish to forget :)
    This one is amazing

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  5. So clever and thought provoking. Lovely haiku!

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  6. Lovely poem ... never forgetting about you, Mr. G ...

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  7. I see you pouring your heart out to a winding blue river. I wonder if that is where you saw yourself?

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    1. Perhaps that's where we go at some points of our lives :-)

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  8. She soothes aching hearts with her murmurs...Nicely done Amrit!!

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  9. may she wash away
    each sad painful memory
    you wish to forget

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  10. Only if forgetting was so easy. :) Great one.

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  11. This reminds me of a stream I used to visit as a child. There was a listening spirit there for me. I like the personal feeling in the poem.

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  12. Amazing!! Is it easy to forget?

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  13. Never enough water for so many words. Nice piece.

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  14. Nicely done, that was from the soul!

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