Friday, December 06, 2013

This Friendship Starts, Today

brief though it was
the meeting held promises
of friendship, loyalty, trust
we often crave for
in neon loneliness

you insist
and I obey
orbiting the sun
the moon smiles
but did you notice
there are two moons here
on either side of the table
they tease, mock, play, fight

the kids within expose themselves
running around the park
as autumn gives way to spring
and we smile

yes
this friendship starts
today

always
forever







18 comments:

  1. The beginning of a lifelong friendship is a beautiful thing isn't it? This is wonderfully written.

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  2. Innocence is the basis of childhood friendships, some special ones grow stronger with time to last forever.

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  3. You made me cry Amrit ... Kidding... It's lovely.... Friendship in all its essence is cherished forever :)

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  4. Meeting someone and falling in love with the whole person and not just one attribute is so important. How well you cover this is your poem of love in the bud.

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  5. Sweet and pure! Beautiful poem on how friendship blossoms!

    Thanks for the sweet comment on my blog ^_^

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