Tuesday, December 31, 2013

And Smiles

gifts and cakes
little boy dreams of Santa
and smiles

and smiles
the pavement where he sleeps
now a mansion


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Expectations.




24 comments:

  1. "now a mansion" - what an ending. Like!

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  2. Very nice contrast of dreams and reality.

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  3. breaking the readers expectation - brrrrrrrrrrrriliantly done.

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  4. Beautiful... great haiku....Amrit..

    RS:)

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  5. Wooah! You got me hooked! Bravo :)

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  6. dream came true for you... nice

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  7. I hope his dream comes true...

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