Sunday, December 15, 2013

New Day

new day
I will pack the
candles in my blue bag
that Santa gifted me last year
along with the sweets and chocolates
wrapped in boxes, red, blue and green, yellow
and walk to the dark alleys of sadness
where Christmas isn't a luxury
neither a need, hence I'll
light up the candles
share smiles
new day


This Poem is shared with dVerse Poetics - Candles and Lights.




30 comments:

  1. Let those smiles light up your life !!!!

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  2. love the packing of the things you have been gifted with and use it to help those in need....this is what christmas is about...carrying on the light... very cool amrit...loved it

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  3. nice...love the compassion in this....after being given, taking that to give back to those in need....giving them a bit of the magic of christmas...i love it....

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  4. I really love the style of this Amrit. I also love the theme of sharing Christmas joys with those who need it the most.

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  5. I love the idea of lighting the candles and sharing smiles! What joy! (I like the form of your poem as well!)

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  6. awww! so much hope and optimism, cheers! to the thought!

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  7. Very inspiring poem. This formation of the poem is called 'nonet', is'nt it?

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    1. I do not know that ... but I loved this form that a fellow blogger uses, and I tried to adopt it :-)

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  8. I loved the shape, and your words are as usual full of light and compassion :)

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  9. Oh you have a diamond soul.. do so.. bring candles and candy,,

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  10. Different form and style - but so rightly said.

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  11. I love the diamond shape you have given to it...and the lines are so beautiful :)

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  12. "Dark alleys of sadness" magic!

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  13. Sharing smiles is the best gift we can give any stranger :)

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  14. loved the artistic design of this post. Wonderfully weaved... Sharing!

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