bright torch
shines over cloudy gravels
sun shows the path
sun shows the path
through honey covered dewdrops
sweet promises
sweet promises
resonates with my dreams
a vision quest
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Vision Quest.
This sounds like a rather pleasant quest!
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Thanks MMT :-)
DeleteWhat a wonderful series on Vision Quest Amrit ... it feels so safe and gentle, but a Vision Quest isn't always gentle (and I can know it).
ReplyDeleteThank You Kristjaan :-)
DeleteYes, if only a vision quest were so easy as following the sun or path of dew. It's usually quite a reckoning with one's self. Your haiku is a lovely thought.
ReplyDeleteThanks Maggie :-)
DeleteA grand thought spun beautifully into words.
ReplyDeleteThank You Usha Ji :-)
DeleteLoved the imagery you've used here to emphasize the intensity of the quest. The vision quest is interesting. Lovely piece of haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sayantini :-)
DeleteA sunlit path sounds like the way for a vision quest
ReplyDeletePerhaps that's how it is :-)
Deletesoft ans supple..:)
ReplyDeleteLovely choice of words Amrit!! honey covered dewdrops illuminating sweet dreams makes for vivid picturization of a journey that is very fulfilling and demanding...
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
DeleteThis is as inspiring as it is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sara :-)
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