Saturday, October 05, 2013

Vision Quest

bright torch
shines over cloudy gravels
sun shows the path

sun shows the path
through honey covered dewdrops
sweet promises

sweet promises
resonates with my dreams
a vision quest


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Vision Quest.




18 comments:

  1. What a wonderful series on Vision Quest Amrit ... it feels so safe and gentle, but a Vision Quest isn't always gentle (and I can know it).

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  2. Yes, if only a vision quest were so easy as following the sun or path of dew. It's usually quite a reckoning with one's self. Your haiku is a lovely thought.

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  3. A grand thought spun beautifully into words.

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  4. Loved the imagery you've used here to emphasize the intensity of the quest. The vision quest is interesting. Lovely piece of haiku :)

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  5. A sunlit path sounds like the way for a vision quest

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  6. Lovely choice of words Amrit!! honey covered dewdrops illuminating sweet dreams makes for vivid picturization of a journey that is very fulfilling and demanding...

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  7. This is as inspiring as it is beautiful.

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