Thursday, October 24, 2013

Tender Flakes

tender flakes
knock on misty window
grandma's kitchen
cooling the broth of winter
ah, the aroma of seasons












20 comments:

  1. Very nice. I can almost smell the stew.

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  2. What a wonderful tanka Amrit ... very nice and so lively ... a gem.

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  3. Very appealing! The aroma is spreading.

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  4. Beautiful. Amazing imagery.

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  5. Love the scene described here. Sounds rather cozy.

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  6. the seasons are a feast for the senses....

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  7. Delicious verse, I'm hungry for more now :P

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  8. You make me hungry with your stew..

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  9. Nostalgia!Love the essence of this Tanka-wonderful!

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  10. this is so warm and a very tender tanka - love the homey effects your words bring out. nice.

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