Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Grey

how the poor soul wished
to have grown grey with age
and not with grief


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Grey.



33 comments:

  1. The worries do take their toll on the soul, eh? Brilliant take on the prompt. Loved this.

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  2. Wonderfully realistic haiku showing great insight and well penned ~ thanks, carol

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  3. This one really says a lot...packs an emotional punch.

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  4. worries age a man more than time, brilliant take Amrit!!

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  5. Love this haiku ... I'm grey with no regrets ... :)

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  6. Striking. Aims at a lonely heart.

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  7. well penned..........grey and grief - two sides of the same coin..........

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  8. Oh, my! What a fabulous haiku, Amrit! The pain of loss is so piercing.

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  9. True,people are for graceful grey of old age,though blacking is common.

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  10. These beautiful and touching words evoke a strong image in my head.

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  11. This is now one of my fav haikus . It's a wonder how just a few words can have so much of an impact . Great work as usual . Cheers :)

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