The worries do take their toll on the soul, eh? Brilliant take on the prompt. Loved this.
Wonderfully realistic haiku showing great insight and well penned ~ thanks, carol
Thank You Carol :-)
This one really says a lot...packs an emotional punch.
worries age a man more than time, brilliant take Amrit!!
Sigh. Oh dear time.
Very poignantly told
Love this haiku ... I'm grey with no regrets ... :)
Thanks Ali :-)
Striking. Aims at a lonely heart.
Thank You Rajesh :-)
well penned..........grey and grief - two sides of the same coin..........
Thanks Sumana :-)
A poignant haiku Amrit.
Thanks Celestine :-)
Very profound !
Thank You Usha Ji :-)
Oh, my! What a fabulous haiku, Amrit! The pain of loss is so piercing.
I agree ... it can be tough !!!
True,people are for graceful grey of old age,though blacking is common.
Yes :-)
These beautiful and touching words evoke a strong image in my head.
Thanks a lot :-)
This is now one of my fav haikus . It's a wonder how just a few words can have so much of an impact . Great work as usual . Cheers :)
Thanks a lot Shonazee :-)
Wonderful thought.
The worries do take their toll on the soul, eh? Brilliant take on the prompt. Loved this.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully realistic haiku showing great insight and well penned ~ thanks, carol
ReplyDeleteThank You Carol :-)
DeleteThis one really says a lot...packs an emotional punch.
ReplyDeleteworries age a man more than time, brilliant take Amrit!!
ReplyDeleteSigh. Oh dear time.
ReplyDeleteVery poignantly told
ReplyDeleteLove this haiku ... I'm grey with no regrets ... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ali :-)
ReplyDeleteStriking. Aims at a lonely heart.
ReplyDeleteThank You Rajesh :-)
Deletewell penned..........grey and grief - two sides of the same coin..........
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :-)
DeleteA poignant haiku Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteVery profound !
ReplyDeleteThank You Usha Ji :-)
DeleteOh, my! What a fabulous haiku, Amrit! The pain of loss is so piercing.
ReplyDeleteI agree ... it can be tough !!!
DeleteTrue,people are for graceful grey of old age,though blacking is common.
ReplyDeleteYes :-)
DeleteThese beautiful and touching words evoke a strong image in my head.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteThis is now one of my fav haikus . It's a wonder how just a few words can have so much of an impact . Great work as usual . Cheers :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Shonazee :-)
DeleteWonderful thought.
ReplyDelete