Ouch! Nicely written!
Thanks a lot :-)
Painful scent this, nicely done Amrit!!
Thank You Reshma :-)
lovely haiku but betrayal and deception are painful and cruel.
They always are :-)
Uh-oh...he's busted. Nicely done my friend.
Thanks Keith :-)
Aw... Thats sad...It reminded me of The Lunchbox movie....
Now I got reminded too :-P
Sad! But the haiku is wonderful. I liked it a lot. :)
Thanks Shilpa :-)
nice lines ......
Thanks Sumana :-)
Ah, what a surprise forher. Well written.
Thank You Usha ji :-)
Lovely haiku.Unfurled a truth more prevalent at present.
Great haiku but how heartbreaking!!
Thank You Kathy :-)
Ouch! That hurt.
Yeah it does :-(
very nice
Ooh, I love this!
Thanks so much :-)
This is good, Amrit!
Thanks Celestine :-)
Ouch! Nicely written!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeletePainful scent this, nicely done Amrit!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Reshma :-)
Deletelovely haiku but betrayal and deception are painful and cruel.
ReplyDeleteThey always are :-)
DeleteUh-oh...he's busted. Nicely done my friend.
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
DeleteAw... Thats sad...
ReplyDeleteIt reminded me of The Lunchbox movie....
Now I got reminded too :-P
DeleteSad! But the haiku is wonderful. I liked it a lot. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpa :-)
Deletenice lines ......
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :-)
DeleteAh, what a surprise forher. Well written.
ReplyDeleteThank You Usha ji :-)
DeleteLovely haiku.Unfurled a truth more prevalent at present.
ReplyDeleteGreat haiku but how heartbreaking!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Kathy :-)
DeleteOuch! That hurt.
ReplyDeleteYeah it does :-(
Deletevery nice
ReplyDeleteOoh, I love this!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :-)
DeleteThis is good, Amrit!
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
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