Sunday, October 27, 2013

Rummage

her heart sank
as she rummaged through his shirt
scent of betrayal


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Hearts - Rummage.




28 comments:

  1. Painful scent this, nicely done Amrit!!

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  2. lovely haiku but betrayal and deception are painful and cruel.

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  3. Uh-oh...he's busted. Nicely done my friend.

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  4. Aw... Thats sad...
    It reminded me of The Lunchbox movie....

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  5. Sad! But the haiku is wonderful. I liked it a lot. :)

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  6. Ah, what a surprise forher. Well written.

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  7. Lovely haiku.Unfurled a truth more prevalent at present.

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  8. Great haiku but how heartbreaking!!

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