Tuesday, October 01, 2013

Eclipse

eclipsed by fate
she sings songs with the moon
lost birds fly home


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Eclipse.



24 comments:

  1. aha, nice prompt you got and nice haiku..

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  2. Skillfully expressed in so many words. Nicely Amrit!

    Hank

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  3. Such sadness captured in your words!

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  4. I felt hope here...nicely done..

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  5. ...she sings songs with the moon ~ lovely line for a wonderful haiku for eclipse ~ we are never alone ~ carol ^_^

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  6. Wonderfully composed haiku Amrit. I am glad to see you again here, you were missed.

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  7. Music eclipses the ache in heart...Beautifully composed Amrit, will drop by and read all that I have missed over a month :)

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