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the right to heal
to brush aside the scars
destined by fate
I lost them too far
the window from where
the sun once rose
now shredded and tattered
is shut and close
deserted and maimed
the hurricane left me blinded
I embrace the dark
after goodness had me defeated
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and then what happened??
ReplyDeleteSuspense :p
Deletea dark one indeed!....
ReplyDeleteThank You Sumana :-)
DeleteGoodness left me defeated.. That's where the real heaviness comes.
ReplyDeleteYeah, that's what makes one lose hope :-(
Deletei hope goodness finds you in the dark. Not that you need it , it needs you !
ReplyDeleteThanks Suyash :-)
DeleteEmbracing the dark leaves me wondering what next.
ReplyDeleteThere is always the other side of the story :-)
DeleteA real hurricane, Amrit? May you be well. We never know the moment when our world turns upside down.
ReplyDeleteI am well ... just a piece of fiction ;-)
DeleteA dark time I fear?! I also wish you some light to creep in.
ReplyDeleteThanks Donna :-)
DeleteThis is so dark & intense... sending light and happiness towards you. Hope all is well..!
ReplyDeleteYes ... All Is Well :-D
Deleteyes intense work!
ReplyDeleteThank You Ollie :-)
DeleteWoah! Reminds me of Breaking Bad for some reason!
ReplyDeleteHa ha :D
DeleteSometimes it takes a little darkness in order to heal - a wise and insightful poem
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae :-)
DeleteIntense!
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
Deletethis is dark yet this is the balance of light. i enjoyed
ReplyDeleteThanks Marcoantonio :-)
DeleteSad!
ReplyDelete:-(
DeleteI've had a week like this. Enjoyed the poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dolores :-)
DeleteVery well written...expressions at their beat!
ReplyDeleteThank You Alok :-)
DeleteThis is very deep and amazing.
ReplyDeleteThanks GL :-)
DeleteNo :/ goodness is never defeated :(
ReplyDeleteWish that was always the case.
DeleteIncredible ending words to this wonderful poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sara :-)
DeleteIntense it seemed.. and obscure as well I guess!
ReplyDeleteVery Very Nice Post.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jamshed :-)
Deletesadness shades the words.Nice.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sarala :-)
DeleteReally loved this!
ReplyDeleteA very deep one !!
ReplyDeleteThank You Pulkit :-)
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