Sunday, September 13, 2015

Embracing The Dark

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the right to heal
to brush aside the scars
destined by fate
I lost them too far
the window from where
the sun once rose
now shredded and tattered
is shut and close

deserted and maimed
the hurricane left me blinded
I embrace the dark
after goodness had me defeated



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48 comments:

  1. Goodness left me defeated.. That's where the real heaviness comes.

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    1. Yeah, that's what makes one lose hope :-(

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  2. i hope goodness finds you in the dark. Not that you need it , it needs you !

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  3. Embracing the dark leaves me wondering what next.

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    1. There is always the other side of the story :-)

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  4. A real hurricane, Amrit? May you be well. We never know the moment when our world turns upside down.

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    1. I am well ... just a piece of fiction ;-)

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  5. A dark time I fear?! I also wish you some light to creep in.

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  6. This is so dark & intense... sending light and happiness towards you. Hope all is well..!

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  7. Woah! Reminds me of Breaking Bad for some reason!

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  8. Sometimes it takes a little darkness in order to heal - a wise and insightful poem

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  9. this is dark yet this is the balance of light. i enjoyed

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  10. I've had a week like this. Enjoyed the poem!

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  11. Very well written...expressions at their beat!

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  12. This is very deep and amazing.

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  13. No :/ goodness is never defeated :(

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  14. Incredible ending words to this wonderful poem.

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  15. Intense it seemed.. and obscure as well I guess!

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  16. sadness shades the words.Nice.

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