Thursday, June 13, 2013

Hotaru (Firefly)

stars descend tonight
on the dewy garden grass
outside my window


a tiny firefly
shows me the way
this moonless night


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Hotaru (Firefly).




30 comments:

  1. I saw the first firefly this summer last night, and it made me oddly nostalgic.

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  2. A start decends tonight - what a lovely start!
    Liked your Haiku

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  3. Enchanting imagery! Lovely...

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  4. hotaru.. that was new for me :)

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  5. Superb imagery Amrit, stars descending indeed!!

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  6. I really like envisioning the fireflies as stars. Nicely done :-)

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  7. nice poem....i have also got ur book 'love stories that touched my heart'...congrats for getting published twice :)

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  8. Both are beautiful but just so love the imagery of the first one!

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  9. a tiny firefly
    shows me the way
    this moonless night

    This is really a masterpiece Amrit. Thank you for sharing on Carpe Diem.

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  10. The second one took my breath away...

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  11. Classy....reminded me of a Tagore song.

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