Sunday, June 16, 2013

A Lotus Blooms Here

monsoon nectar
pouring down from heaven
a lotus blooms here

a lotus blooms here
in the midst of that pond
where once we kissed

where once we kissed
now hopes filled with muddy drought
longing for rebirth

longing for rebirth
I tread along unknown path
a lotus blooms here



This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Hasu (Lotus).




38 comments:

  1. Lovely rebirth of love ... is possible ... I'm going through it right now ... I think ... :)

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  2. You write beautifully, my friend.

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  3. wow..
    monsoon nectar.. Loved it

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  4. What a beautiful story caught in a wonderful cascading haiku. Thank you Amrit for sharing.

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  5. Such a sweet and beautiful cascade.

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  6. May your life's pond be filled with many Lotus :)

    Lotus

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  7. Simply superb...the lines create such gorgeous imageries even the sad ones!!

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  8. I love the way you developed the ideas. Beautiful! :)

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  9. Replies
    1. But the heart throws caution to the wind :-P

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  10. lovely story embedded in words of the haiku...nice one...:)

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  11. I always get lost in your poetry.

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  12. The second haiku in the cascade is excellent

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  13. I just loved monsoon nectar!! Can anything be more divine than love across time?

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    1. True ... love can't be surpassed :-)

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  14. I like how the lotus blooms throughout :-)

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  15. lovely post...buddy...n i am liking the change of ur blog..!!

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  16. Just beautiful, birth of a bloom.

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