Monday, June 24, 2013

Painting The Skies

painting the skies
red, blue, green and purple
and orange too

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stars shoot skywards
smiles of joy, togetherness
flashing silken wings 


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Hanabi (Fireworks).




28 comments:

  1. Fireworks painting the skies...I love it.

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  2. You paint a nice picture with your words :)

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  3. Your words really work. :)

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  4. I came, I saw, I smiled with joy too....

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  5. Very nice...second one my favorite...silken wings.

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  6. flashing silken wings .. that's just perfect

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  7. You have painted an extraordinary fireworks with your words in these two haiku. Wonderfully done. Chapeau!

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  8. The second part. Te second part is exquisite!

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  9. Fireworks make me think of silk on fire.

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    1. Wow ... that's a nice comparison !!!

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  10. Sparkling lines on sparkling fireflies! :)

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