Tuesday, June 11, 2013

Her Minted Breath

her minted breath
whispers sweet love notes
cooling my heart


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Suzushi (cool, coolness).





32 comments:

  1. ... I suspect things may get steamy again soon Amrit ;)

    the weary swagman

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  2. A shame that whispers sweet cool down the heart ...

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  3. well hope it's not cooling your heart too much!
    Very romantic / warms the heart

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  4. Mint and love go well together ... like mint after a good meal ... mmmmh :)

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    1. Yeah ... mint is refreshing, much like love :-)

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  5. yes indeed those freshly brushed teeth... well captured

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  6. haha..
    can do wonders, the minty breath :)

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  7. Nice ... romance ... sometimes coolness is for cooling down the heat of love ... well done.

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  8. Well at the cost of being flippant these lines ( so summery and chiffon like) reminded me of the mint-with-the-hole :)

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