Thursday, October 25, 2012

Smiling Tears



Smiling tears,
Hidden within nerves,
Humid bones.


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Tears.





30 comments:

  1. Good Day Green Speck, what a nice haiku you've written on 'tears' ... Tears hidden behind smiles ...
    Thank you for sharing and participating on Carpe Diem.

    Namaste

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  2. Tears say so much about the hidden feelings. They are a symbol of strong emotions. Your haiku keeps getting better and better. Keep it up! :)

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  3. I feel it so deep... haiku is your domain...

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  4. 'humid bones'....poignant! Beautiful Haiku, Speck.

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  5. i am so thrilled that there are men out there who show their feelings and sometimes even cry!

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  6. gree.ny this poem of yours is a mysterious beauty

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  7. Beautiful! Humid bones--just stopped me in my tracks!

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  8. This is why I love haiku. So much is said while not being said. "Humid bones" was a brilliant finish.

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  9. I love this and humid bones really grabs your attention!
    :D Well Done~

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  10. Love this haiku. It says so much and you capture the contradictions beautifully in "Smiling tears". "Humid bones" is awesome. Much respect.

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  11. I feel sadness here. Well penned.

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  12. I don't believe I have ever seen a smiling tear before...

    Tears

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