Monday, October 01, 2012

Storm



Rumor mills abuzz,
Stories re-cooked with spices,
Storm in a tea cup.

A husband's horror,
Forgetting his wife's birthday,
Prepare for the storm.


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Storm.

26 comments:

  1. Wowwww!!! Storm In a tea cup. I bet in India no blogger can compete with you in Haiku.

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    1. That's really a big big compliment. Thanks Himanshu, but I am still learning :-)

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  2. I love the storm in the teacup. I also have generated a few of the storms in the second haiku...sometimes I feel sorry for you guys...

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    1. Ha ha ... sometimes guys really enjoy that ;-)

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  3. The tempest will crack your tea cup...yikes!
    Clever, so clever and well done~
    I so hope this isn't true..

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  4. Ja Ja .. This oversight is unforgivable.

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  5. I really liked how topical and current the last one felt.

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  6. Well done! Love your range of poems from thoughtful to humorous. Great play on the words too :-)

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  7. 'A storm in a cup of tea' awesome line. I love the way you've used the prompt for today. Nice haiku and very strong in it's imagery.
    Thank you for being part in Carpe Diem. Please spread the word and tell your friends about Carpe Diem. (smiles)

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    1. Thanks Kristjaan. I would love to share the word about this challenge :-)

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  8. Awesome! Love the words you use..
    And husbands; how come you can't remember those important dates, that you remembered before got married?? lmao.. :))

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  9. Beautiful set....Second one..Hahahhahahahha....:D
    You made me smile today ;) :D :)

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  10. Last lines,hahah!
    None could be better words!

    very cute! ;)

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  11. Hehehe, poor hubby!
    I like both of them.
    My favourite line, "Stories re-cooked with spices".
    :)

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