Friday, October 26, 2012

Crowded





"Oh My God. This crowd is killing me. Let's start a new home, you & me."

"I'm sorry, dear, I can't. What you call crowd, is my own family."



This 140 Characters Fiction  is shared with Succinctly Yours.






24 comments:

  1. This is a master piece! :)

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    1. Wow ... that's a great compliment ... thanks Simran :-)

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  2. Yes, sometimes the family grows and grows ...

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  3. Lovely, try! Just 140 characters & you expressed such deep emotions :) Like Simran said, it's a masterpiece :)

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    1. Well I tried my best ... and am glad you liked it :-)

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  4. How cute and simple :-) Great one.

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  5. BIG family...lol
    Great thinking in this. Lovely pic :)

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  6. This is so good, and you know it is even true sometimes :-) Well done

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  7. Wow, that's really clever. I know I've wanted to say goodbye to the 'crowd' at times. :) Great photo for this sentiment.

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  8. This frequently is the lament of young couples. Not easy to cast off emotions of blood ties. Cleverly done Green!

    Hank

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