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Gold plated dew drop,
Humming melodious tune,
Fragile glass of life.
Fragile glass of life,
Whispers in my naked soul,
Fake complexities.
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Fragile.
Your 'gold-plated dew drop' is stunning! I enjoyed this very much.
ReplyDeleteThanks Barbara :-)
DeleteWonderful images then 'Fake complexities'. I keep having to re-read this - I'm not sure that I understand it but it's beautiful and thought provoking :-)
ReplyDeleteThank You Ermie :-)
DeleteWow! This is a wonderfully composed haiku ... not only the theme in this one is fragile, but also the words you've chosen and the image. Really ... well done.
ReplyDeleteWhat is simple and beautiful is true. Thanks for this poem.
ReplyDeleteSo delicately weaved...It reminds us that life is fragile :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...
Thank You Panchali :-)
DeleteThe first one is my favourite! I really liked it:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tarang :-)
Deletebeautiful :) :)
ReplyDeletelove the second one.. nakedness. Quite fragile indeed
ReplyDeleteI like your wordcrafting here.
ReplyDeleteThank You McGuffy :-)
DeleteLife is indeed fragile. Not sure complexities are always fake though.
ReplyDeletePerhaps, that depends on situation :-)
Delete'Fragile glass of nature'. Awesome line. Wonderfully composed haiku.
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