Tuesday, October 09, 2012

Fragile

(Image Source: http://www.columbia.edu)


Gold plated dew drop,
Humming melodious tune,
Fragile glass of life.

Fragile glass of life,
Whispers in my naked soul,
Fake complexities.


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Fragile.




22 comments:

  1. Your 'gold-plated dew drop' is stunning! I enjoyed this very much.

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  2. Wonderful images then 'Fake complexities'. I keep having to re-read this - I'm not sure that I understand it but it's beautiful and thought provoking :-)

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  3. Wow! This is a wonderfully composed haiku ... not only the theme in this one is fragile, but also the words you've chosen and the image. Really ... well done.

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  4. What is simple and beautiful is true. Thanks for this poem.

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  5. So delicately weaved...It reminds us that life is fragile :)
    Beautiful...

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  6. The first one is my favourite! I really liked it:)

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  7. love the second one.. nakedness. Quite fragile indeed

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  8. I like your wordcrafting here.

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  9. Life is indeed fragile. Not sure complexities are always fake though.

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    1. Perhaps, that depends on situation :-)

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  10. 'Fragile glass of nature'. Awesome line. Wonderfully composed haiku.

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