Saturday, October 06, 2012

Home

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Meandering streams,
Galloping across countries,
They rest in their homes.

Music of the soul,
Dancing over vibrant lips,
Welcome home, sweetheart.


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Home.

42 comments:

  1. music of the soul. Lovely, very nicely done. I enjoyed this one alot.

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  2. Song of river on rocks; always inviting, always welcoming. Great work.

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  3. The song of a river ... to help you towards your home. Dancing ... wonderfully composed haiku set.

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  4. Beautifully done! 'Music of the soul dancing over vibrant lips' That is lovely!!

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  5. Some of the sweetest words in the world are these: "Welcome home!"

    Shadowy Home for Critters

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  6. Love this part most : "Music of the soul, Dancing over vibrant lips" - ♥

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  7. The first is so lovely, the second so romantic.

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  8. Lovely contrast between the open landscape and intimacy at home, between galloping and dancing, between the streams and your sweetheart...
    I especially love these lines:
    Music of the soul,
    Dancing over vibrant lips

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  9. Romantic... Your words danced their way into my head as i read it! :)

    Live to die at home!

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  10. This made me feel at home :)

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  11. Beautiful haiku. I love the seocnd one.

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  12. dancing music is homely indeed.

    profound haiku.

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  13. The second is my personal favorite. such beautiful language.

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