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Meandering streams,
Galloping across countries,
They rest in their homes.
Music of the soul,
Dancing over vibrant lips,
Welcome home, sweetheart.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Home.
Nice one Amrit!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sayantini :-)
Deletemusic of the soul. Lovely, very nicely done. I enjoyed this one alot.
ReplyDeleteHome sweet home ~
ReplyDeleteVery true :-)
DeleteSong of river on rocks; always inviting, always welcoming. Great work.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ron :-)
DeleteThe song of a river ... to help you towards your home. Dancing ... wonderfully composed haiku set.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kristjaan :-)
DeleteBeautifully done! 'Music of the soul dancing over vibrant lips' That is lovely!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Barbara :-)
DeleteLovely, homely words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anthony :-)
DeleteVery touching poem!
ReplyDeleteSome of the sweetest words in the world are these: "Welcome home!"
ReplyDeleteShadowy Home for Critters
Thanks MMT :-)
Deletesweet home...well said !!
ReplyDeleteLove this part most : "Music of the soul, Dancing over vibrant lips" - ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks Mama Tim :-)
DeleteThe first is so lovely, the second so romantic.
ReplyDeleteThank You Jolly :-)
DeleteLovely contrast between the open landscape and intimacy at home, between galloping and dancing, between the streams and your sweetheart...
ReplyDeleteI especially love these lines:
Music of the soul,
Dancing over vibrant lips
Romantic... Your words danced their way into my head as i read it! :)
ReplyDeleteLive to die at home!
Thank You Pranita :-)
DeleteVibrant haiku as well as lips
ReplyDeleteThanks Judith :-)
DeleteThis made me feel at home :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Ben :-)
DeleteBeautiful haiku. I love the seocnd one.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! Loved this one...
ReplyDeleteThank You Ekta :-)
DeleteVery well written.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :-)
Deletedancing music is homely indeed.
ReplyDeleteprofound haiku.
Thank You Morton :-)
DeleteThe second is my personal favorite. such beautiful language.
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