Tuesday, October 23, 2012

Praying

(Image Source: http://yang-sheng.com)


Praying moon dissolves,
Waves ripple in devotion,
Give me some sun light.


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Praying.




30 comments:

  1. Very nice. The moon need sunlight.

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  2. I love moon-watching, but definitely vote for sunshine every time....

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  3. 'waves ripple in devotion' ... what a great line. Nice spiritual haiku Green Speck. As always I enjoy reading your posts on Carpe Diem. Thank you for giving me a purpose to go on with Carpe Diem. You're one of the haiku poets who shares every day on Carpe Diem. Thank You.

    Namaste

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    1. Thanks Kristjaan. You give me the purpose to write ... I am glad to be a part of your Carpe Diem :-)

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  4. Isn't that a beautiful pic too!

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    1. Yeah ... The pic inspired me to write :-)

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  5. Spoeken like a true poet! Love this Green Speck!! :-)

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  6. You have created a magic mood in your haiku inviting to contemplation.
    The pic is inspiring too.
    :)

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  7. Beautiful. The poem does justice to the photo; and the photo does justice to the poem.

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  8. Nice take on the prompt. And the pic fits perfectly !

    Take Care

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  9. "Waves ripple in devotion"
    A much needed peaceful read for me this morning. thank you for beginning my day with such loveliness.

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  10. I like the image with this and the word play with the moon dissolving.

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  11. That is so lovely--makes me sigh with contentment :-)

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  12. Picture perfect is complimenting the poetry..And I am always in love with the moon... :)

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    1. Moon is lovely ... I feel so drawn towards it !!!

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