Thursday, November 06, 2014

Surprise Was

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surprise was -
     on a bright March morn
     Spring blooming in dawn
     lips nervous, eyes raining wide
     bent on my knees, proposing for a ride
     "Yes," u said
     "Forever," I prayed.

surprise was -
     the summer I turned twenty
     in June, gifts received aplenty
     but none as special as this
     closing my eyes, I experienced bliss
     our first kiss, witnessed by stars
     ever so special, I knew we'd go far.

surprise was -
     autumn breeze in September skies
     colours fading amidst those lies
     the first glimpse of distrust, and you said "Sorry"
     things would be fine, I hoped, trying not to worry
     "Let's start afresh, let's give it a try,
     the ice would melt, baby please don't cry."

surprise was -
     December cold burning with tears
     crushed under blows of myriad fears
     you said you've found someone, and departed with a "Bye"
     I sat down on the corridor, trying to find out "Why"
     a new year around the corner, but would Spring ever be back
     I try to erase, but your scent still lingers on my track.


This Poem is shared with Mindlovemisery's Menagerie - Surprise.



28 comments:

  1. ohhh..that was such a piquant poem Amrit. From the beautiful dreamlike beginning to a sordid end surfacing a heart-breaking betrayal, each word is laden with intense emotions..loved it

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  2. Awwww .......That's so beautiful :) Just Loved it :)

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  3. Different seasons of love.. Nice!

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  4. So many of us can empathise with your suffering...it does not last and a much lovelier girl will enhance your life like a
    new breath of Spring... :)

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  5. ah how we toss around words like love and forever without really comprehending their meaning...what a hard place to be as well...small betrayals of the heart---they hurt....

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  6. Such a heartbreaking story! :/ :( Touched !

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  7. May the march morn come again.....
    This was yet again a brilliant one.

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  8. wonderfully worded Amrit, varied emotions like the seasons...

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  9. Such rawness here, Amrit. You cold feel the hope and joy breaking down bit by bit.

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  10. All the seasons in beautiful words. I had tried Haiku on seasons and posted earlier.

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  11. I m here for the first time...
    And... WOW!!!
    Its so beautiful... :) :) :)

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  12. I hope spring surprises you with joy. Beautifully penned.

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  13. This is heart-breaking, poignant, and tender, beautiful writing Amrit

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