Thursday, November 20, 2014

Dusk

sitting on park bench
he bids goodbye to the sun
and welcomes the moon


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Dusk.



35 comments:

  1. Beautiful, simple and elegant.

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  2. And that says it all. Very well written!

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  3. and in this way the hours are exhausted..nice :)

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  4. Sunset is always a spectacle worth watching!

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  5. He's waiting for something.. And there goes the wheels in my head.. Lovely, as always!

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  6. That's life: saying goodbye to one thing, and welcoming another.

    Creeping Dusk

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  7. Dude how do you manage to belt out so many haikus? *in awe* :)

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    1. YES! that's my question too!!

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    2. Ha ha ... thanks for finding my haiku likable :P

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  8. Park benches are good vantage points for all sorts of light...and darkness...

    One More Dusk

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  9. Generally when we speak of dusk a kind of melancholia creeps in. But your lines created a romantic interlude with bidding adieu to a day and welcoming the night

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  10. Heheheh kya tha yeh. I just don't get what is Haiku. Its like going to an art exhibition and staring at a blank canvas for appreciating its minimalism. Hehe.

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    1. Ha ha ha ... loved your definition :D

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  11. A day caught in three lines. Awesome!

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