Saturday, July 13, 2013

Swing

innocent giggles
float across scented breeze
warm summer swing


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Swing.





40 comments:

  1. Nothing like innocent giggles...and sometimes they spread throughout a room :)

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  2. This would be among the most beautiful haiku for the day...well done..

    I invite you to visit me too here...May not be as befitting as yours..yet you may enjoy..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/ah-swinging-childhoodhaiku.html

    RS

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  3. Beautiful imagination..
    So sweeet...

    You may read me at:
    http://www.locomente.blogspot.in/2013/07/insecure.html

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  4. Giggles and swings certainly go together !
    Peace
    Siggi

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  5. Very nice...lovely image of childhood.

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  6. This is very sweet & innocent.

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  7. This caught me Beautifullly! :)

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  8. What a beautiful scene. Stunning!

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  9. I can visualize a playground, full of innocent giggles, and scented breeze ...btfl :)

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  10. Beautifully composed Amrit, swing has a secret power to summon laughter and joy :)

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  11. Smiles :)
    that's the exact reaction I got after reading that !!

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  12. Yes, that beautiful child is happiness!

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  13. So beautifully strung! Reminds me of those beautiful childhood days. Nostalgic, sad and happy all in those three verses!

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  14. Amrit this is an awesome Haiku. Great rhythm!!

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  15. Lovely piece!
    So much said in just three lines. (Y)

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