as I wander from shore to shore
in quest of what I lost before
the hidden fallacy comes to light
truth is wrong, not what seemed right
the earth is flat, no, not round
'cause what I sought could not be found
points don't meet, neither do we
some love stories fail to fly free.
This Poem is shared with Sunday Scribblings - Wander.
Another beautiful creation of yours. "Wander" in its true sense could be felt in this poem. It's always nice reading your poems, Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Balqis :-)
Deleteand all those who wanders are not lost.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poetry!
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Thank You Ekta :-)
DeleteI think the secret is not to look too far afield for love as it is usually close to hand.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the visit.
Thanks Oldegg :-)
DeleteIt will be found sometime....in its own time... Beautiful poem - one of your best!
ReplyDeletevery nice poem...
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Thanks Amit
DeleteThis has filled me with awesomeness! The rhyming is perfect, the expressions are poignant and the beginning and the finishing of the poem aptly goes with the theme. Nice take on the prompt :)
ReplyDeleteThank You very much Sayantini :-)
DeleteThanks a lot :-)
ReplyDeleteSome love stories fail to fly free
ReplyDeletethat line was best :)
heart keeps wandering.. it never stops doing that.
Absolutely :-)
DeleteAgree...seek and ye shall find...does not necessarily happen.
ReplyDeleteNot always :-)
DeleteLoved the simplicity in those lines !!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteA thought ... deep indeed.. ends do not meet .. so true ..lovely !!
ReplyDeleteThanks :-)
DeleteNot all love is lucky to fly free, beautiful Amrit!!
ReplyDeleteAmazing! I loved these lines the most
ReplyDeletepoints don't meet, neither do we
some love stories fail to fly free.
keep writing!
Thank You AS :-)
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