Saturday, July 20, 2013

Wander

as I wander from shore to shore
in quest of what I lost before
the hidden fallacy comes to light
truth is wrong, not what seemed right
the earth is flat, no, not round
'cause what I sought could not be found
points don't meet, neither do we
some love stories fail to fly free.


This Poem is shared with Sunday Scribblings - Wander.



26 comments:

  1. Another beautiful creation of yours. "Wander" in its true sense could be felt in this poem. It's always nice reading your poems, Amrit.

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  2. and all those who wanders are not lost.

    Beautiful poetry!

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  3. I think the secret is not to look too far afield for love as it is usually close to hand.
    I enjoyed the visit.

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  4. It will be found sometime....in its own time... Beautiful poem - one of your best!

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  5. This has filled me with awesomeness! The rhyming is perfect, the expressions are poignant and the beginning and the finishing of the poem aptly goes with the theme. Nice take on the prompt :)

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  6. Some love stories fail to fly free
    that line was best :)

    heart keeps wandering.. it never stops doing that.

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  7. Agree...seek and ye shall find...does not necessarily happen.

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  8. Loved the simplicity in those lines !!! :)

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  9. A thought ... deep indeed.. ends do not meet .. so true ..lovely !!

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  10. Not all love is lucky to fly free, beautiful Amrit!!

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  11. Amazing! I loved these lines the most

    points don't meet, neither do we
    some love stories fail to fly free.

    keep writing!

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