Saturday, August 10, 2013

Oh White Dove

oh white dove
will you let me fly with you
to the land of peace

to the land of peace
singing the song of blue waves
where angels kiss


This Haiku is shared with Recuerda Mi Corazon - Haiku My Heart.




27 comments:

  1. gentle and gorgeous....to the land of peace.

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  2. Oh, if only the whole world could journey to the 'land of peace.'

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  3. The land of peace is right past the edge of the earth...

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    1. How I wish that the earth be a land of peace and prosperity!

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    2. Thanks Priti and Usha Ji :-)

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  4. Beautifully written. I hope one day that the whole world can find peace.

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  5. amrit your haiku is a song of peace. in saying it out loud my heart met yours in the
    comfort of blue.

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  6. a pure beauty in this work Amrit - bravo

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  7. I wouldn't mind a bit of this land of peace! Lovely!

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  8. Perfectly in harmony with nature, very peaceful with a mysterious magical touch to the haiku Amrit!!

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  9. doves signify pristine and peaceful like no other...I wish the doves lead us all to the land of peace...

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