Monday, October 20, 2014

Release

releasing her fears
she sets afloat paper boat
lost stories on board

This Haiku is shared with Haiku Horizons - Release.




24 comments:

  1. lovely! some times it becomes so necessary to let go of past!

    Happy Diwali!!

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  2. Lost stories within the paper boat -- very appealing! :)
    And the bearer is free --

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  3. Ah! Finally...
    This requires lots of courage.
    Good one!

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  4. Trying to forget her past? good one.

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  5. How cathartic is must have felt for her to release that boat...

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  6. O, love this poem ... is right up my alley ... as I delete my poems come New Year ... Love, c.

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    1. ... and poems are like paper boats ... :)

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    2. Some poems are like the Titanic but meet the same fate as the paper boats!

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    3. Paper boat or Titanic ... both sank :-(

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  7. All those lost stories! I felt a lot of emotion reading this lovely poem.

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  8. Fragile, yet bravely starting on her writing journey after letting go of her fears. I love it! Well done!

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  9. I enjoyed the narrative flow of this poem.

    PS Please leave off the anti-robot words. They are difficult to read and navigate.

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    1. Thanks Alice ... by the way, I do not have anti-robot words enabled.

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  10. It's always nice reading your Haiku. Well written! :)

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