Tuesday, October 07, 2014

Castle

a sparrow
inside the castle
or a spy


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Castle.


24 comments:

  1. Hmm.... this makes the reader pause, doesn't it? The sparrow sees all .... without being noticed ....

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  2. nice little and cute haiku!

    sparrow as a spy..so sweeettt! :D

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  3. That made me laugh! He is a bit more obvious than a fly on the wall, :)-

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  4. Sparrow Spy intriguing concept

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  5. I always thought of becoming a sparrow in my next birth, don't know whom will I spy on :)

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  6. Sparrow spying good imagination :-)

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  7. one would be noisy the other silent. It is a fine haiku.
    How are you Amrit?
    Big hugs to you!

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    1. I am doing great Leslie ... a big hug to you too :-)

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