Friday, October 03, 2014

Fire

why blame just dragons
who spit fire as they exhale
humans' tongues sting too


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Fire.



30 comments:

  1. By far one of the best Haiku's I have read Amrit. I can never write in this style form (woman of too many words I think) but this is commendable.

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  2. Something with which both sexes excel equally...the dragon is not a match:) Enjoyed this haiku !

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  3. yes, true...some people speak so bitterly that to without any provocation that it actually stings..i hate such people, they deserve a good beating :X

    Nice Haiku!

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  4. Nothing nicer than a fire ... this time of year ...

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  5. They sting worse than dragons, imo.
    Great haiku :)

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  6. Fire ogled from the mouth is devastating.

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  7. Human tongues do sting more than fire...well penned

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  8. Human tongues not only sting ... the their venom can be deadly!

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  9. Simply awesome! So well-said about human tongues. :)

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  10. Very well put. Human tongues sting like none other, exuding fire that leaves burnt scars that live for a lifetime.

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