Monday, October 13, 2014

A Fly

if I were a fly
I would hide myself
from tears, yours
and guilt, mine
somewhere in your room
so that dawn gifts me
a sight of you
and dusk shall hide
those feelings still true


This Poem is shared with Poetry Jam - If I Were.



35 comments:

  1. wowow! this poem is so touching and last line is very poignant..loved it :)

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  2. btw, it also reminds of 'fly on the wall' song by Tattoo!

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  3. Beautifully expressed... Love it!

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  4. each line touches our heart to ponder awhile:))

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  5. wow beautifully expressed with full of feelings!! :)

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  6. I sense love and melancholy at the same time.
    Nice!

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  7. short and sweet..little sad too..

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  8. Oh, lovely really....and very poignant verse!

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  9. Very strong and yet subtle poem! Thanks for taking part.

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  10. There is sadness in this as well as mystery. Lots in a few words.

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  11. I really enjoy the approach you took with the challenge ...

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  12. I'm afloating along with the beautiful emotions
    it carry :)

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  13. cool little love poem...playful, shy....

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