Wednesday, July 23, 2014

Three Little Bats



three little bats
hanging from the ceiling
in my bedroom

oh dear bats
do please come down
down down down

on an night like this
when summer blows hot kisses
let's turn on the fan


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Issa's Hot Night.



24 comments:

  1. Lucky not many eat bats in India :) Good one..

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  2. You would turn on the fan to blow the bats away? Or maybe you envision the flapping of the bats' wings as your fan? I shall ponder, while I savor what you've written.

    At the River’s Edge

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    1. Thanks MMT :-) Visualization is completely yours :p

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  3. Hahaha super cute one. Sing this to your kids when you have them :)

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  4. I am suddenly feeling like cuddling an ugly bat.

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  5. I like this one. Though I am not a fan of bats :) well except for the Batman movie franchise!

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  6. Three bats. Too cute. Much scary. :D

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  7. That was very clever - one can just imagine, lying in the sweltering heat!

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  8. Gorgeous trio Amrit ... good to see you again ...

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  9. oh summer's hot kisses, that's a great image. I love this response to the prompt!

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  10. Thanks for sharing, what are your thoughts on prayer come share on my latest bloglet thanks.

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  11. I'm not very fond of bats but your verse made them cute Amrit :) Loved the phrase summer's hot kisses.

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