Wednesday, July 09, 2014

Our Hearts, Sync And Rhyme


let silence frame our words
as we hold on to time
the world obeys, for once
our hearts, sync and rhyme

This Poem is shared with Prompt # 62 - Mamihlapinatapei.



23 comments:

  1. sometimes, silence says far more than our words ever could...
    and hearts in sync...that can be a very beautiful thing...smiles.

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  2. A perfect description of a true lasting love. ♥

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  3. Amrit, I believe that at times silence can express deeper meanings than words could ever say.
    Especially in the machinery of love, when all parts are in sync, it IS the sound of rhyme which I hear.

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  4. so beautifully crafted words with such deep set emotion! loved it Amrit, really loved this verse :)

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  5. Beautiful...Nowadays, it is hard to feel the power of silence....

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  6. Oh brilliant! Just like a romantic movie :)

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  7. Such an emotional poem. It touched the heart.[
    Amrit I have nominated you for the Quintet Radiance Award. Congrats. Kindly refer to my post on this topic.

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  8. no words needed...
    Beautiful, Amrit
    Stopped in to say "hi" hope all is well :)

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    1. Thanks Moonie ... doing pretty fine ... hope all is good at your end :-)

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  9. Amrit this is exquisite wow love it!

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