Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Somewhere Down The Isle



Somewhere down the isle
I will play you a song
champagne and guitar
nay, it would never be so wrong
'cause the world will sing
a hymn so deep
across the oceans
I will gift you the ring
plotted with my love
a kiss and a hug
the map will obey
to our dreams it will sway
somewhere down the isle.


This Poem is shared with The Mag - 186.




20 comments:

  1. Somewhere down the "isle"...wonderful play on words. Your writing never ceases to amaze.

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  2. The words just flow like wine! Good one!

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  3. I like how you repeated the first line as the last; it enhances the poem and brings it full circle. Good meter and rhyme. Nicely done.

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  4. Love the isle/aisle thing...nice!

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  5. I agree with Tess ... isle and aisle have different meanings, here they mesh beautifully.

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  6. A lovely poem, Amrit. It could easily be the words to a song. I love isle, and aisle, too!

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  7. lovely song... champagne & guitar a good mix for listening

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  8. Cool , the map is a living document, constantly being renegotiated , i like that !

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