Ab pachtaay hot kya jab chidiya chug gai khet!!
Ha ha
That yearning...And that confusion seen and felt only in first love...Loved this one!!
Thanks Satya :-)
Perhaps he can ask her tomorrow...the only chance regretted is the chance not taken.
Let's wait for him ;-)
Ah, a missed chance. A fine romantic take!
Thanks Celestine :-)
Alas...! :(lovely take, Amrit!
Thank You Panchali Di :-)
A burning desire ...and he missed that opportunity :(nice take... waiting for the new header pic on LYL :D
It will be up soon, hopefully ;-)
Very charming =)
beautiful! :)
Thank You Kulasa :-)
Romance and ballet is one of those timeless combinations. Well penned. :)
Thanks a lot :-)
He should have, now there is no use crying over spilt milk :)
Absolutely :-)
aww you are so good with haikus :)
Thanks Jyoti :-)
There is such elegance in your poetry!
Thank You Momina :-)
Great capture of a moment lost.
Thanks ND :-)
Has to be the start of a new relationship. Lovely!
Thank You Sara :-)
Ab pachtaay hot kya jab chidiya chug gai khet!!
ReplyDeleteHa ha
DeleteThat yearning...
ReplyDeleteAnd that confusion seen and felt only in first love...
Loved this one!!
Thanks Satya :-)
DeletePerhaps he can ask her tomorrow...the only chance regretted is the chance not taken.
ReplyDeleteLet's wait for him ;-)
DeleteAh, a missed chance. A fine romantic take!
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteAlas...! :(
ReplyDeletelovely take, Amrit!
Thank You Panchali Di :-)
DeleteA burning desire ...and he missed that opportunity :(
ReplyDeletenice take... waiting for the new header pic on LYL :D
It will be up soon, hopefully ;-)
DeleteVery charming =)
ReplyDeletebeautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Kulasa :-)
DeleteRomance and ballet is one of those timeless combinations. Well penned. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteHe should have, now there is no use crying over spilt milk :)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely :-)
Deleteaww you are so good with haikus :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyoti :-)
DeleteThere is such elegance in your poetry!
ReplyDeleteThank You Momina :-)
DeleteGreat capture of a moment lost.
ReplyDeleteThanks ND :-)
DeleteHas to be the start of a new relationship. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sara :-)
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