Sunday, September 08, 2013

Garland

worn out garlands
decayed smell of rotten flowers
love once, now lost


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Garland.








20 comments:

  1. ooo flowers tat are used to symbolize love, show a lot of pain here...nice one...but like OE said new love will always come ur way..:)

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  2. Very vivid. A well-captured image in words!

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  3. Oh, the death of flowers is hard-hitting, Amrit! Amazingly expressed. Just tooo good!

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  4. Lovely haiku, Mr.G ... even rotten flowers serve a purpose ... nothing is lost in this universe :)

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  5. Hopefully there will be another love on the horizon!

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  6. Ah! A strange reality...
    Implying "This phase will move on too"

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  7. I am glad I caught this one, Amrit. I haven't been participating every day. This is powerful.

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