Thursday, September 12, 2013

Holy

weary feet
brimming with devotion
holy pilgrimage


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Holy.








28 comments:

  1. Devotion make weary feet a little less weary don't they? Awesome Haiku Amrit.

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  2. excellent. Love the devoted feet.

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  3. Very nicely composed, however, the syllables of the lines make 4-6-5, my knowledge says the pattern is not right. Please check it and correct me if I am wrong :)

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    1. The syllable pattern is actually meant for Japanese Haiku. When you write an English Haiku, you do not need to stress on the syllables, as that makes the Haiku heavier :-)

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  4. Nice effect of 'feet brimming with devotion'.

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  5. You have expressed the journey beautifully!

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  6. The 'yatra' though tiring is invigorating.

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  7. The blessings for ourselves that we must seek!! True test of faith!!

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  8. Devotion often gets us where we need to go...

    Holyseed

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  9. Very nice! That's a true devotion.

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  10. This is a haiku treasure. So beautiful!

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  11. The spirit of devotion overcomes every obstacle ! Nice :-)

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