Monday, May 27, 2013

Canvas of Nothingness



Hello
Yes dear
Oh, here, there
I follow you now
as you paint patterns
in the canvas of nothingness
void, depleted colors
strokes of brushes
fine, gentle, mild
you dissolve
sinking


This is my first attempt in writing a "pattern poem". I am really inspired by my friend Cat who writes beautiful poems which have a pattern of their own. Do check her blog here.


This Poem is shared with Magpie Tales.




32 comments:

  1. Tears of joy ... Thank you ... you are the master of words, Mr.G ... I'm just stuttering and stumbling ...

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  2. Quite skillful; well done...

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  3. I like the words and the pattern. I looked at your friends blog - amazing how the patterns are formed!

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  4. This is gorgeous, I love the pattern!

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  5. A painting that never quite got off the ground...ecgoes of the one that slipped away, but somegow still maddeningly near, just below the surface

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  6. You have also written a pattern poem that is quite beautiful!!!

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  7. The patterns are nice, GS! Would have to spend a little time in arrangements I suppose! Nicely!

    Hank

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  8. Nice diamond shape you created, Speck. I shall also try making an arrangement...Good fun!

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  9. You did it beautifully in pattern and words. :)

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  10. Loved your pattern on the canvas of nothingness and the choice of words..

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  11. Lovely and lyrical,,well done with your artistry,,

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  12. "As you paint patterns on the canvas of nothingness" - love it :)

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  13. wow!!! lyrical and beautiful..:D...nice one..

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  14. Playing with forms here..haa...good one...you got the art..I can never for sure...looking forward to more of such patterns :)

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  15. The format of the piece simply adds more beauty to the article!

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