Friday, January 04, 2013

Waves Swept Them Away



we held hands, and lips
promises made yesterday
away, waves swept them

waves swept them, away
yesterday, I lost my love
today, lost myself


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Yesterday.




40 comments:

  1. Woah....what can be better than this...Good work buddy :)

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  2. The end of promises and love relationships is painful and bittersweet -- heartache is tough no matter who (or what)initiates the ending.
    Yesterday

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    1. Very true ... but it's all a part of life :-)

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  3. This is worst one can face... it is really tuf to live without your loved one...

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  4. I loved the first and last line. Strikingly contrasting and both speak so much. Love lost steals a part of us,which hardly comes back. Though we try to bring it back again, its gone once and forever.

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    1. It's difficult to retrieve lost love :-)

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  5. Sad, romantic, touching...; you have played wonderfully with words.
    :)

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  6. heartbreaking... we held hands, and lips-- how lovely ^^

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  7. This is melancholy and beautiful at the same time. Masterful.

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  8. It feels very true.
    You ride along with the magic in your words.

    Take Care!

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  9. The unprecedented master of haiku, beautiful lines expressing lovely emotions. Loosing oneself after loosing your love, such an intense meaning in a haiku, impeccable Greeny :) Amazingly lovely !

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  10. Things happen .. change happens ... as long as we are alive ... there will be change ... Mr.G.

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  11. These are beautiful and so very sad.

    The most important thing is to find yourself again.

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  12. love can be so deep that we are in jeopardy of identity theft....the key is to keep looking for yourself

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  13. not bad..read quite a few of ur haikus....good jaaab!!!!!altho....same theme kinda repetitive hoe jacche na??? :-D anyway...happy new year..

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    1. Happy New Year Rahul ... perhaps you are right, and that could be due to my laziness :-P kichhu alaada korar try korbo ebaar :-)

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    2. break the mould dude....Love lost romantic hero wala image ajkal ar oto chole na ;-)not much in vogue...:-D But your works are good...keep up the quality..:-D

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  14. So sad today! Tomorrow will he find himself? I hope so!

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  15. Deep and meaningful is so few words...thank you

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    1. Perhaps it can find a happier ending in future :-)

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