Thursday, January 31, 2013

Ice Melts



ice melts
streaming down her cheeks
his lips interrupt


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46 comments:

  1. You might want to consider linking this over at Poets United today. Kim's "Verse First" prompt is "icy" and this would fit there as well.

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    1. Wow ... I would love to do that ... thanks Mary :-)

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  2. So tender and poignant,,love it,,

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  3. Wow lovely :)

    Sorry I'm reading after long, just got busy and had no time to drop by.

    Take Care

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  4. This one is a gem, Amrit! exquisite!

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  5. A huge fan of small stones and the power they contain, I am thrilled I read this one. Big meanings, little verses. You nailed it.

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  6. oo very nice, evocative...the melting ice has a few meanings i think...

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  7. Well done...I love how you did this!
    I love how huge your message is!
    :D

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  8. Awww the tenderness just melts one's heart...

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  9. You have captured a sweet moment:)

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  10. Wow! OK, this is much too short for such a scene. I want more! :)

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    1. Well, I would surely try for more next time :-)

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  11. I like. She sips her sorrow.

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  12. You've got it as a gift Amrit... Saying a lot in lesser possible words :) Kudos!

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