Monday, January 28, 2013

Children

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children in school
brag about adventures
teacher smiles

his icy stare
scared the playing children
they run back home

polite words
she tells them stories
children love her


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40 comments:

  1. Altho I have no kids, I do like them, and your delightful trio made me smile!

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  2. Children are the true joy of our world.

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  3. This is cute and creepy all at the same time :-)

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  4. Children are one of life's most precious gifts.

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  5. cute haiku!!
    Thankyou so much amrik for your lovely comments on way2express ... hey your blog is approved by google adsense ,,it's great ..:)

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  6. Okay. Let me admit. Anything related to children is sweet and has innocence, which automatically tugs at the heart.

    Lovely little things here, Amrit. :D

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  7. My experience was slightly different ... lovely stories from teachers ... icy stares from parents ... forgive me, if I misinterpreted your peom, Mr. G?

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  8. children are mirrors
    of how grown up treat them
    sowing seeds of war.

    Love your poetry

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  9. first and last part were lovely, second part made me hold my breath! loved it.

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  10. Excellent. I love the way you combined two prompts to create a wonderful poem... :-)
    Eliz

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  11. That's clever, drawing on two prompts and using the three words so deftly.

    Very well done!

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  12. innocently beautiful...made me remember my school days...though we hardly got scared when the teacher rolled her eyes...lol:D

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  13. Cute pic ,beautiful words,innocent children..

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  14. Immaculate pieces! Each one flowed so effortlessly, speck! You're a genius!!:)

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  15. Phew, 'his icy stare', scares me too. He must be a stalker. Thankfully it sounds like the children have got a loving teacher.

    My 3WW is HERE

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    1. Loving teachers are always needed in a child's life :-)

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