Thursday, January 10, 2013

There Is A Place Where I Can Go

There is a place
Where I can go
A thousand moons
Wow, what a show.

There is a place
Where I can go
The stars will dance
Merry waves flow.

There is a place
Where I can go
A romantic proposal
She won't say no.

There is a place
Where I can go
The birds will sing
........ So?

There is a place
Where I can go
Am too sleepy
Will run to my burrow.

There is a place
Where I can go
Now running short of words
Forgive me friends , Ho Ho !!!



This Poem is shared with Carry On Tuesday.

32 comments:

  1. Added a little humor. Nice.
    And well written. :)

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    1. Didn't add anything ... way too sleepy :-P

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  2. Lolz ...i started it as a poetry with depth and passion and solitude ....but it ended up givn me a smile :)

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  3. the humor at the end made me smile...its nice to have that special place to go thought to get away...where the magic happens...

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  4. Love it,,,,it made me smile too,,,a little taste of many things,,, :-)

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  5. The last one made me laugh, good twist, Amrit!

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    1. Perhaps my sleepiness served the purpose of making my friends laugh :-)

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  6. hahaa..this one really defines the real you :P

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  7. Ha that's quite fun at the end... Smiles...

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  8. That was such a clever write up with a dose of humor in it.. :)

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  9. This is good and I like your sense of humor.

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  10. Ho-ho to you! What a delightful romp!

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  11. there is a place I can go
    delightful verses to read in a row :D
    Loved it!!

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