Monday, January 14, 2013

Warm Whisper




warm whisper
brushes my ear
your secret
spoken soft
I smile
so do you


This Small Stone is shared with WOWH.




30 comments:

  1. The little parts of life that you depict, portray your happiness in little things.
    Like you don't want the bigger chunks of money, but the little crumbs of love.
    Beautiful way of expressing.
    :)

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  2. Aaww...that is so cute...cute poetry...:)

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  3. These small stones are so beautiful! :)

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    1. And as you suggested, I also gave it a shot :)

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    2. Yes I read it, and it's beautiful :-)

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  4. Very sweet and tender,,,like it a lot,,,

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  5. very beautifully written ... loved visiting your blog too ...

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  6. Sweet ... should be:

    spoken softly

    I like the small stone poetry form :)

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    1. I didn't want to add -ly to soft as I felt it might make the word a bit heavier :-)

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  7. lovely, the way express in so few words. This one is very thoughtful and sweet.

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  8. I will soon suffer from toothache with all the sweetness here. You have a knack for this type of expressions.

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    1. Ooops ... you can check my bitter poems too ;-)

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  9. That one short and yet so moving does speak about some awesome grasp on writing!

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  10. nice intimacy in this...i would def be smiling as well...

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  11. the tenderness in this verse is truly heart-warming...it makes one go "Awwww"

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  12. This is beautiful! It made me smile. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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  13. softly I smile at this whisper..

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  14. now, this is a sweet one. loved it!!

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